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高中英语选修英语写作考后写作讲评探究课-厦门大学附属实验中学
Teaching Plan
Teaching objectives:
Help students learn to polish their writing task especially after a test;
Help students have a review of the basic steps to write a good composition;
Help students collect some useful vocabulary to describe the location and some common phrases that
help to enhance coherence of the writing;
Guide students to learn from each other through discussion and presentation; Arouse students’ interest and confidence in writing by cooperative learning.
Teaching focus:
Help students form the good habit of writing with five basic steps and polishing their writing before the final edition.
Teaching difficulty:
How to polish the writing efficiently.
Teaching procedures: Step 1 Lead-in
Show the class the writing task they completed in the monthly test and review what they have learn about writing the similar topic. Step 2 Presentation
Present the five-step writing procedure. Use some easy tasks to help them get into the habit of writing that way.
Help students collect some useful vocabulary to describe the location and some common phrases that help to enhance coherence of the writing. Step 3 Appreciation
Give the class a reference writing and help them to appreciate some good expressions in it.
Give the class some good examples written by some of them and help them learn to appreciate good writings. Step 4 Practice
Give students two selected compositions. They need choose one and discuss in groups about how to polish it. Grammar mistakes and improper expressions are both what they need to deal with. They can write down their suggestions on the learning sheet first and exchange the opinions later. Step 5 Presentation
Invite representatives of two or three groups to have a presentation. Make comments if necessary. Step 6 Homework (Choose one)
A: Rewrite the task again. (Encourage them to write with their own style). B: Write a new one shown on the learning sheet.
公 开 课 学 案
How to write a letter to introduce a place
--考后试卷书面表达讲评
书面表达(月考)
假如你是校学生会主席李华，你校的一位外教Tom想在你市寻找一套80平米左右的公寓居住。几日前，你在
四季花园小区内看到一处。下面是小区位置及周边情况简图。请用英语给他写一封信，向他介绍一下情况。 内容包括：
1. 小区的地理位置； 2. 小区的地理优势；
注意：
①字数100字左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； ③开头，结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： 四季花园：Seasonal Garden Dear Tom，
You wrote in your letter that you wanted to rent ____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Are you satisfied with it If so, I will arrange it for you. Yours, LiHua
Step 1 审题构思很关键
审题
1．确定体裁：本文为说明文；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称； 3．确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。 构思
第一部分：引出话题。 第二部分：房屋简介。 第三部分：全文总结。 Step 2 核心词汇想周全
1．80平方米的公寓
2．小区 3．坐落在…… 4．十字路口 5．生活配套 6．方便舒适 7．公共交通
常用方位表达法
(in/to/on the) south / north / east / west of ... beside / next to / close to / near...
on the opposite side of.../ opposite.../ across... not far from / within your easy reach / be easy of access
Step 3 由词扩句雏形现
1. 最近，我碰巧看到一个80平方米的公寓，它可能适合你。
2．在它的周围有超市、中心医院、常春藤高中，对面还有银行。
3. 四季花园小区位于民族南路和修业路交汇的十字路口。
4. 小区后面有一个花园，结束一天的工作之后，你可以在公园里散步放松一下。
Step 4 句式升级造亮点
5. 把句3改为复合句，含分词短语
6. 把句4改为含复合句，含定语从句
Step 5 过渡衔接联成篇 常用衔接词归纳： 1) 表层次:
firstly, to begin with, for one thing... secondly, still, furthermore, for another... thirdly, next, besides, in addition, what's more... finally, last but not least... 2) 表转折和让步；
on the contrary, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, yet,
although, though, in spite of, regardless of, even so, after all, despite the fact that... 3) 表因果；
therefore, consequently, thus, so, as a result, as a consequence, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to 4）表递近：
Furthermore, moreover, what is more, besides, also, not only...but also..., in addition 5) 表总结：
in a word, in brief, in conclusion, in short, all in all, in summary, 6) 其他
for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, frankly speaking, in other words, in my view/opinion, as far as I'm/sth. be concerned, ... 参考范文：
Dear Tom，
You wrote in your letter that you wanted to rent an apartment in our city. Recently I happened to find an 80-square-meter flat that might be suitable for you.
Located at the crossing of Minzu South Street and Xiuye Road, Seasonal Garden is the best community I would like to recommend to you. Around it there exists a supermarket, a central hospital, a Changqingteng High School as well as a bank standing across the street. I figure these life facilities are bound to make your stay convenient and comfortable. Besides, public transportation is also within your easy reach. Buses No. 23, 28 and 40 can take you everywhere you want to go in our city. What's more, behind the community is a beautiful park, where you can go jogging to have good relaxation after a day's work.
Are you satisfied with it? If so, I will arrange it for you. Yours, Lihua
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